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Title: Shop
Author/Artist:[livejournal.com profile] yeaka
Pairing(s): None.
Prompt: Gen fic--Draco takes Scorpius Christmas shopping (to pick out a gift for his mother and/or grandparents). From [livejournal.com profile] torino10154
Word Count: 989
Rating: G
Contains (Highlight to view): *Oh, Merlin! So saccharine it burns!*
Disclaimer: Harry Potter characters are the property of J.K. Rowling and Bloomsbury/Scholastic. No profit is being made, and no copyright infringement is intended.
Notes: Did you know that [livejournal.com profile] y3llowdaisi3s and [livejournal.com profile] g_bowneyes are two of the most lovely betas and people in the world? True fact!
Summary: Draco takes Scorpius shopping for the perfect Grandfather-gift.



“Ooh,” Scorpius mumbles excitedly, stopping mid-step. Draco stops just in time to not bump into his son, and Scorpius whirls around, his gray eyes alight with thought. “What about a racing broom?”

Draco smiles indulgently, but gently dissuades him. “That might be a tad... er... young for Grandfather.”

“I know,” Scorpius says, and smiles in somehow both a genuinely innocent and very Slytherin style. “But perhaps it would encourage him to play more Quidditch with us.”

“I think Grandmother might kills us if we get him up that high.” Pausing to think for a minute while the crowd in Diagon Alley parts and pulsates around them, Draco suggests, “How about a new cane?”

Scorpius scrunches up his nose. “Then he’ll think we think he’s old.”

Draco scrunches up his face back. “He is old.”

“Dad!”

Draco chuckles at his son’s instantly affronted look. He reaches out a gloved hand and pats Scorpius’ blond head, assuring him, “It’s alright, honey. When you get old, you know it.”

“Well I don’t want to know it,” Scorpius grins, and rolls his eyes at the public display of affection.

But Draco is determined to be a warm, caring opposite of his father form when he was young, and places a tender hand on the middle of his son’s back. He steers Scorpius around, and they continue to stroll through the feverish bustle of people, all chattering animatedly about what they’re purchasing or asking for Christmas.

Draco already has Scorpius’ gift picked out, and something for both of his parents. He’s not sure what Scorpius has, but he asked Draco’s help in shopping for Lucius, and Draco never passes up an opportunity to spend time with his son. The day Scorpius went off to Hogwarts was one of the most traumatizing days of Draco’s life. Separation anxiety ensued for several months, until Draco successfully obtained a job there as the Potions Professor, much to Scorpius’ combined embarrassment and amusement.

But Malfoys put family first, and Scorpius got over it. Draco would’ve broken out into joyous tears if his own father had shown him as much dedication growing up, and Draco’s determined to break some family traditions.

Others, like long blond hair tied in a black bow, he’s now upholding. He doesn’t carry a cane yet, but now that he knows Scorpius thinks it’s a sign of aging, he makes a mental note not to.

“Ooh,” Scorpius pauses, and Draco stops again, following his son’s gaze. “How about an owl?”

“Grandmother and Grandfather have an owl,” Draco drawls curiously.

Scorpius shrugs. “Not a good one. I don’t get answers to half my letters.”

Draco says, “I think an owl might not be best,” and doesn’t have the heart to elaborate on the fact that Lucius isn’t sending them back consistently because affection is a difficult thing for him. He’s getting better at it, slowly. Scorpius, who has turned out to be wonderfully lovely (probably as a result of Draco’s overly-affectionate determination) is slowly training him out of it. The last time they visited the manor Scorpius simply refused to leave until he got a full hug from all family members, which earned Draco an incredulous look from Lucius, and a giggle from Narcissa.

Draco always hugs Scorpius, and frankly thinks Lucius should open up and hug more. The Dark Lord has been dead for a long time, and he’s sick of everyone fronting in shadows. ...Perhaps the worst part of is that Draco can tell, he just knows, that Lucius wants the adoration. Lucius wants to feel loved, every bit as much as the rest of them. But he was raised the old-fashioned Malfoy way by his father, and it’s a hard thing to break. He can tell from the way that Lucius looks at him that Lucius is proud of the way Draco’s raised Scorpius, and all he wants to do is return the favour.

They’re walking again, and this time when Scorpius suddenly stops Draco isn’t fast enough. He stumbles into Scorpius, and then hurriedly steps back again, straightening his robes. “Sorry,” Scorpius chirps.

“No, I’m sorry, I shouldn’t have been in such deep thought.” Satisfied with his fixed clothes, Draco looks up. “Spotted another shop?”

“No, actually,” Scorpius drawls, in a voice that sounds so very like his father’s. But his smile is far brighter than Draco’s ever was. “But I did think of the perfect gift for Grandfather.”

“Oh?” Draco asks, arching an eyebrow. “Any idea where we can get it then?”

“Home,” Scorpius says.

“Home?” Draco raises an eyebrow. “Are we going to re-gift?”

“Grandfather’s an expensive man,” Scorpius says. Draco nods, brow knit in confusion. “It’s really hard to shop for him, especially when every year he gives the exact same neutral reaction, no matter what he unwraps – it’s hard to gauge what really makes him happy.” Draco’s head tilts to the side. He opens his mouth, but Scorpius cuts him off. “I know, I know, family is the most important thing to a Malfoy. I really want to get that through to Grandfather, though. I think the best gift we could give him is love.”

Draco’s grin is so wide it splits his face, and he doesn’t care who sees. He proudly tells his son, “I couldn’t give him any more love if I wanted to.”

“We could show him more, though,” Scorpius says excitedly, and he starts to tug Draco back the way they came, out of Diagon Alley. “We could write him a poem, or... or give him a photo album! Or both! Or I could make him some new bows for his hair! ...Do you think he’d like that?”

Draco takes them off to the side, and tightly grips his son’s arm, ready to Apparate them. First he beams with pride, and makes sure Scorpius sees it. He says, “I think he’d love that.”

Then he dives forward to hug Scorpius tightly, and they’re pulled off into the air.

Date: 2012-12-04 06:23 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] icicle33
You have just melted me into a big pile of gush. This is just beyond adorable. I have a weakness for doting Father Draco and you portrayed him so well. His love for Scorpius was evident in every word and Scorpius was just too cute for words. Lovely little holiday piece!

Date: 2012-12-04 06:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] susannah-wilde.livejournal.com
This fic made me warm and happy inside :) I love how Draco interacts with his son, giving Scorpius praise and affection, which is something Draco lacked during his own childhood. Also, kudos to Scorpius for giving his grandfather the gift of love. Well done!

Date: 2012-12-04 06:52 pm (UTC)
torino10154: Cropped Hufflepuff crest (Good Book)
From: [personal profile] torino10154
Aw, that's lovely. I just utterly adore Draco being the best dad he can be to Scorpius. And really, Scorpius is right, Lucius has no need of things but a bit more love? Oh, yeah. Great job!

Date: 2012-12-04 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amorette.livejournal.com
I love watching Draco with his son!!! I love daddy!Draco. You did an amazing job with Scorpius - he was very sweet and funny!

Date: 2012-12-04 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unbroken-halo.livejournal.com
This is absolutely adorable. Draco's internal thoughts and his reactions to Scorpius are brilliant. I loved seeing him as the doting Father and breaking the cycle of the generations.

Date: 2012-12-04 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.livejournal.com
*sniffs back happy tears*
That's just wonderful. I can totally see Draco trying to be the father to his son that Lucius wasn't to him. And Scorpius' sweetness and genuine adoration of his entire family shone so very clearly through here.
Beautifully done!

Date: 2012-12-04 11:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sisi-rambles.livejournal.com
Oh that was beyond adorable! I love Draco as an awesome dad, and your portrayal of him is wonderful.

Date: 2012-12-04 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veritas03.livejournal.com
Lovely! :D

Date: 2012-12-05 12:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadowycat.livejournal.com
A truly lovely little story! :D

Date: 2012-12-05 03:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] justamuggle.livejournal.com
That was just absolutely wonderful! I love seeing Draco interacting with Scorpius and see such differences in him as a father and how his father was with him. Great Christmas spirit!

Date: 2012-12-05 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fantasyfiend09.livejournal.com
I have the stupidest smile on my face. I love the contrast between the two sets of father/son. It's nice to see that Malfoy parenting is getting squishier. Scorpius will be an amazing father someday.

Date: 2012-12-06 12:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doraeazure.livejournal.com
This is precious. I love how determined Draco is to be different than his father, and how wonderfully he's succeeding. Scorpius is so adroable and sweet!

Date: 2012-12-07 12:32 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] evening12
This story was so lovely. It needed to be written and you mystery author did a great job with it. I love how affectionate Draco was being and how it didn't see out of place. It truly felt like how Draco would behave with his son. And Scorpius, what a sweetheart. I adore how much he loves his family.

Date: 2012-12-07 05:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] g-bowneyes.livejournal.com
Squeeeeeeeeee I love this cute little story so much! You did so well!!!

Date: 2012-12-07 01:38 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] birdsofshore
That was wonderful, mystery author. I loved spying on Draco's parenting and you made it entirely believable that Draco would want to break with tradition and be a loving, connected father. There were some lovely phrases - such as "Draco's affectionate determination". It all made me smile a lot!

Date: 2012-12-09 01:56 pm (UTC)
lokifan: Cartoon!Malfoys holding hands, text "Malfoys put family first" (Malfoys: family first)
From: [personal profile] lokifan
AWWWWWWW. OMG. I am utterly dead of cute.

Date: 2013-01-07 05:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salviohexiia.livejournal.com
your scorpius is such a wonder, as always.

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