Date: 2014-12-08 09:50 pm (UTC)
OMG. I love this so freaking much. This was so good, Mystery Author, so good! I would almost complain that it was too short, but it was the perfect length and the perfect everything.

I loved the way you describe Myrtle! What a wonderful character you managed to bring to life (pun intended). I truly enjoyed the part where she would rant with the workers until they fled from her bathroom - poor girl, being without a bathroom place where to float and sulk in peace. LOL. I was grinning non-stop there.

I loved all the new "corporeally challenged" that are floating for the castle now. And I am in awe for the fact that you'd manage - in such a little amount of words - to describe so many characters. Ah, poor Colin! And yes Tonks and Remus! :D

And I loved so much the bathroom scene! It was an absolute delight. Fred was so cocky and so sweet, even after death. I loved how smooth he is with Myrtle and the unexpected kiss and the last line really made me smile. :) That was adorable and I loved every single word of this story. It was masterfully written and I cannot praise it enough, MA! I loved it more than I can say. Lovely, lovely piece! Wonderful! Kudos! 1000 kudos! xx
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