Aw, what's wrong with hols? I like it because it doesn't seem like something Draco would say but it does sound like something Charlie would say, at least to me, and it's kind of subtle evidence of their previous relationship and how close they once were (that Charlie's vocabulary had infiltrated Draco's). I'm sorry if it yanked you out of the story :( but I'm pleased you were able to claw your way back in and enjoy!