http://clairvoyant.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] clairvoyant.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] mini_fest 2009-12-04 05:10 pm (UTC)

Beautifully done, asnowyowl. You captured the sadness and confusion of a scared child with this story. I also like Eileen's quiet determination to make life better for her son.
One gets the feeling that life wasn't so happy for Eileen even before that moment, and it won't get any better.


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