Each story has the right dark, wartime feel, and yet they're hopeful. And you made the Malfoys look human. Also, the interaction with Sirius and Harry is brilliant. Wiggling their noses at each other. You do a great job alltogether with Sirius. The "married looks" Harry and Lily exchange, and Sirius reaction to them.
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And you made the Malfoys look human. Also, the interaction with Sirius and Harry is brilliant. Wiggling their noses at each other. You do a great job alltogether with Sirius. The "married looks" Harry and Lily exchange, and Sirius reaction to them.