http://kiertorata.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kiertorata.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] mini_fest 2017-12-07 07:38 pm (UTC)

I really enjoyed this! The whole thing felt very canonical, with Rowling-type humor and spot-on characterization for both of the boys. Both boys being bi was great, and it was great that the teenage sex was as awkward as it should be. I liked how well Harry knew Ron with the whole situation about the dress robes. I would have maybe preferred to have all author's notes in the end, because they interrupted the story a bit, but they won't stick out as much if you post to AO3 or other places. Anyway, good job, MA!

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