I was pretty curious about feedback to this story because Astoria is usually portrayed as a shallow, vain character, which I don't think she is. And she is bashed often enough. This is just like a small torch I hold up for her...
I love writing banter and flirting, but it took me a moment to get her voice right, as I didn't want her to be too timid... (And honestly, I LOVE writing sex scenes *haha*)
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I was pretty curious about feedback to this story because Astoria is usually portrayed as a shallow, vain character, which I don't think she is. And she is bashed often enough. This is just like a small torch I hold up for her...
I love writing banter and flirting, but it took me a moment to get her voice right, as I didn't want her to be too timid... (And honestly, I LOVE writing sex scenes *haha*)
Thinking of spinning that story further... :)