Oh, Mystery Author, I loved it! This was so sweet and lovely and it properly warmed my heart this in cold December! I love Ron and Hermione in this, especially Ron, and having the story in his perspective was such a great idea! He is funny and lovable and just plain adorable. Well done, MA.

The part where Arthur talks to him in the shed is hilarious. I almost almost expected him to say something about sex, but I read the prompt and it was just hilarious how he started babbling about Muggles and teeth and the list of things that he wanted Ron to steal from Hermione’s parents’ house. Arthur can be so out of the world. (Muggle and Wizarding too, right?)

I love the way Ron talks to people and then thinks at the conversations and then starts worrying and having ideas. That’s well funny, MA. And thank you for writing a Ron who is funny and not ridiculous. And gosh, Hermione’s parents are lovely. Especially her dad who is waxing poetic about dentistry (that line made me giggle).

And the ending was absolutely lovely! I loved the fact that his problem was solved by Mr Granger and by Ron who was looking longingly at the stuff that he wanted to steal for his dad. That was genius and a perfect ending to this little, lovely fic! Great job, MA, such a lovely Christmas piece. :D xx